Wednesday, 18 April 2012

invisable children

I wish to support invisable children cuz there soo poor. from 8 up there in war, my mom would not let me play with weapen.I wont to support invisable children because deaths from 30 to 130 peaple get kiled by durty  water  they drink eath day theres durt,feses,blood thats why im supporting invisable children they need to carry big conntaners on there head for from 3 to 8 miles every day .im help by bringing in monny to support them...
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  1. agriffith25 April 2012 at 05:52

    Hi Caleb. I really like this post, for a few reasons:
    1. You have told my lots of reasons why you want to help invisible children. This makes your argument very strong!
    2. You have brought in personal connections, talking about your own mother and family, and how this treatment for children is wrong
    3. You have given me a suggestion on how we can help.

    Keep up the great work!

    Ms. Griffith

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  2. Nathan9 May 2012 at 07:08

    hey its nathan good blogs but u need 2 work on spelling caleb

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